What a great picture! I actually lold when I saw this!
such a simple concept, presented so nicely!
The lighting of this picture is absolutely perfect, no glare on the white paper or anything!
I really like how much of the pencil you kept in the picture, it's just the perfect amount.
It's funny, I can't explain to you how funny I find this picture, it really is amazing!
I have absolutely no tips or suggestions on how to improve the picture, because it's just so great!

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